03/12/2003, 04:08 PM
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| زعيــم متألــق | | تاريخ التسجيل: 06/08/2002 المكان: طنط الدنيا "الرياض"
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Abdul-aziz Al-Awwal
I have just some few notes. (and i support alhilal team since10years), instead of "since", it is only appropriate to use "for". Also, the tense of the sentence should be in past participle, so the sentence becomes (and I have been supporting alhilal for 10 years)
Also: (i don't forget first time I cried on it...) This sentence is correct, but in the matter of appropriateness, it should be (I can't forget the first time I cried on it...)
(after alhilal match with alweadad almagrebe) instead of "with", it is better to use the word "against", so the sentence becomes (after alihlal's match against alwedad almagrebe).
(and alhilal was losen this match) Should be: (and alhial lost this match).
And by the way, you didn't talk too much .. I think I am the talkative person right now. I hope to see again in this thread.
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thank you my brother alhaloob
look,i have many words in my head but i don't sure a true spell
any way i hope speak english very well
your brother abdulaziz 1st |
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